LO: I can edit my writing.
Today, I would like you to look back through your adventure and check for firstly spellings – use your three / four spellings sheet to check them. Then check for punctuation especially the comma in your fronted adverbials.
Finally, check the piece of writing that you have one conjunction, preposition and at least one adverb in your writing. Check that one of these is used as a fronted adverbial.
You do not need to re write this just show me your edits using a different colour pen (if you have green then great but don’t worry any colour is great.)