LO: I can edit my work and ensure that I have included the features we have learnt.
Using the piece you wrote last week, go through and edit it. Change boring words for exciting one. E.g. Said - exclaimed. Whilst you're editing, underline each feature with a colour.
Adverbials Adjectives Relative Clauses
The five lucky golden ticket winners were hurried into a long, narrow corridor, which would eventually lead to the chocolate room, by Willy Wonka.
Suddenly, with a tone of voice that scared the life out of Charlie, Veruca shouted “what’s that silly thing at the end?!”
“Why my dear,” Wonka exclaimed, “patience.”